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Sleepy Silver by Atmospark Sleepy Silver by Atmospark
Unoriginal title is unoriginal.

A vector of :iconsilverrainclouds: *SilverRainclouds' OC, named Silver Rains.

She's my favourite OC in the fandom, and Silver's done a couple of awesome sketches of mine, so it was about time I returned the favour :D

Well, this is something I haven't done in a while, and that's make a vector of my own sketch!

Time Taken: About an hour
Program: Inkscape
SVG Download: [link]
Original sketch (and references): [link]


Silver Rains belongs to :iconsilverrainclouds: *SilverRainclouds so please ask their permission before using this one.

Edit - 20/6/12: Apparently I completely forgot she's a pegasus..
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Hi! I'm really happy to be writing a critique for your art work. Your art work was good, with just a few minor flaws that are mainly just based off of preference. I don't know what the original OC looks like, but, I'm not here to critique the OC. I'm here to critique your art work :D So, to start off, it's pretty cute. The first flaw that I noticed, again this could be just a matter of preference, but I think the eyes should have been the same gray-ish color that you used to outline the pony. It makes the eyes stand out a little too much and, in my opinion, takes a little bit away from the actual art work. The main focus shouldn't be the eyes, but the other parts that are more complicated and detailed. The only other flaw that I noticed is the wing. It seems like the feathers aren't detailed enough. It looks like there aren't any individual feathers, but it's just one big feather with lines in it. I would've singled them out more and make each feather more defined. Now for some good parts --- your tail and main were beautiful. You mixed the colors perfectly and got the "shading" of it just right. The other thing I really liked was the little music notes on the pony's hip. It's hard to draw something that small digitally and still be able to tell what it is. Thank you so much for posting, and hope you like my critique!!:D
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The Artist thought this was FAIR
6 out of 6 deviants thought this was fair.

Vision: I think that it's great that your returning a favor by drawing up a friends OC, and in my opinion, you did it justice.

Originality: This is always a bit of a sticking point for me, and normally I'm a little harsher on OC's, but this one is alright. I personally have seen quite a few gray coated blue maned pegasus OCs in my time, so it has started to wear a bit thin for me. I think the cutie mark is pretty interesting, and rain is one of my favorite weather conditions so I give you an extra point for that. Overall, the design is inoffensive, but could use a little more pizzazz (within reason, of course).

Technique: Textbook vector work, and it works overall. Not much to really critique here, so let's move on.

Impact: This really didn't impact me as much as some of my other critiques have, but it is a nice drawing, and could inspire someone who's a little bit newer to the fandom.

Overall: A great effort, with solid artwork, if a little on the bland side as far as design is concerned. But, to each their own, and I'm sure the creator of this OC is happy that you did this for them, and that's really what matters.

Hope this helped!
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4 out of 4 deviants thought this was fair.

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Twightfan Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Student Artist
Atmospark Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She's a very cute pony :D
Twightfan Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Artist
Hehe yes she is. XD
ArcticFox501 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
can this be used as a base to make another vector?

wanting to commission someone else and might ask to do this.
Atmospark Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sent you a note :)
abydos91 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is one of my favorites OCs :D Great job as always :D
SilverRainclouds Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012   Digital Artist
All of my d'aww!
curmudgeonjon Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Professional Writer
well tickle my nipples and call me bob

it's another fucking pony drawing
Atmospark Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hi Bob!
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